Friday, 29 August 2014

Adding detail to my story



I am learning to add details in my writing. I am getting better to describe things I want to write about but it is still tricky to think of different ways to make my story more interesting.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Fantastic story about our garden Alex. Remember to try and add more details and reread your story to make sure you haven't made any typing or spelling errors.